在过去三年的学习和生活中,你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱,此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。 感谢 父母(给我提供幸福的生活,为我做了很多事情)老师(辛勤工作;对我严格要求,让我努力学习)同学(让我减少孤独,明白友谊的重要性;无法忘记一起度过的日子) 祝福 所有人身体健康、好运。 注意:1. 词数60-80词,围绕主题可适当发挥; 2. 文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得出现真实的地名和校名。参考词汇:友谊的重要性 the importance of friendship, 严格要求 be strict with…In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them.
In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them. First, I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are working hard. They are strict with me and they make me study hard. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship. I will never forget the days we played and studied together. Thank you, my parents, my teachers and my classmates. I hope you are in good health and have a better future. |
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,题目中给出的材料较为简略,动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点,可以适当发挥。在写作时,本文的主语可以用第一人称,时态一般应该用一般现在时。为了是表达更有逻辑性,可以使用序数词,连接词等。 点评:此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料,不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够,就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试,可以有选择的背诵一些范文,这样应考时就会有法可依。 |