第1个回答 2008-04-25
你在百度搜,我曾经看到过的,改改就好了,英文的不会翻译就找中介好了.一般不会很难的,别人帮你写也不是你的情况,还是自己努力吧,想出去本就是个痛苦的过程,我都快崩溃了,一起加油吧本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答 2008-04-26
wlhx_0809, awesome writing, but if i'm the teacher/officer read this, i won't let you in, its just not real and all you want to do is simply get into the school, talk about what you can do to help the school and its community,talk about what you want from university, that's what university looking for, don't give them those "back to china, i gona...." no body cares...you are not even got in yet, so how do you know you can learn from them... "like internet?" that's not even a valid reason...everyone likes internet, you can't just say, "oh, i found there are so many awesome school in canada and i would like to study in one of them..." i'm telling you now, its not going to work, not to the top school anyway, see, you're aiming for Alberta, that's y...they just want money...who cares what you will be doing after you graduate...