写作思路:对学校现在的样子多简要介绍,然后回忆曾经学校的状况,二者对比表达学校的变化。
示例如下:
When you walk around our school, you can see various flowers and trees everywhere. At the same time, you can smell the taste, breathe fresh air. It's a nice place for us to study.
Please look at the new building over there. It's our library that was painted white again this year. It not only looks more beautiful, but also has increasingly more books than before. Reading different kinds of books can enhance our horizons and increase our knowledge.
I still remember I entered the school two years ago, the library was old enough and I always couldn't find my favorite comic books. Therefore, I often complained to my classmates that the library was out of fashion that we were not able to learn fresh knowledge in it.
What was even worse, as a member of school basketball team, my partners and I had few chances to practice, as the playground was too small to play and full of so many students after school.
Luckily, I don't have to worry about that anymore, because our playground is large enough for all of us to play games, and basketball court is also bigger. That's wonderful!
My school has changed a lot, for it is more beautiful and modern. I love my school.
翻译如下:
当您在我们学校里走来走去时,到处都能看到各种各样的花草树木。同时,您可以闻到味道,呼吸新鲜空气。这是我们学习的好地方。
请看看那边的新楼。今年是我们的图书馆再次被漆成白色。它不仅看起来更漂亮,而且比以前拥有更多的书籍。阅读各种书籍可以增强我们的视野并增加我们的知识。
我仍然记得两年前我进入学校时,图书馆已经足够老了,我总是找不到我最喜欢的漫画。因此,我经常向同学抱怨图书馆不合时宜,因为我们无法在其中学习新知识。
更糟糕的是,作为学校篮球队的一员,我和我的搭档几乎没有机会练习,因为操场太小了,无法玩耍,放学后挤满了这么多学生。
幸运的是,我不必为此担心,因为我们的操场足够大,可以供我们所有人玩游戏,篮球场也更大。那好极了!
我的学校发生了很大变化,因为它更美丽,更现代。我爱我的学校。
写作思路:从学校图书馆开始写作,写出图书馆从前与现在的对比,写出变化。
When you walk around our school, you can see various flowers and trees everywhere. At the same time, you can smell the taste, breathe fresh air. It's a nice place for us to study.
女士们,先生们,大家早上好!我很荣幸告诉大家关于我学校的变化。当你行走于校园的时候,你随处可以看到各种各样的鲜花和树木。同时,你可以闻到味道,呼吸新鲜空气。这是我们学习的好地方。
Please look at the new building over there. It's our library that was painted white again this year. It not only looks more beautiful, but also has increasingly more books than before. Reading different kinds of books can enhance our horizons and increase our knowledge. I still remember I entered the school two years ago, the library was old enough and I always couldn't find my favorite comic books. Therefore, I often complained to my classmates that the library was out of fashion that we were not able to learn fresh knowledge in it.
请大家看那边的新楼,那是我们今年重新刷白的图书馆。它不仅看起来更漂亮了,而且书本也比以前多了。阅读不同种类的书籍可以开阔我们的`视野,增长我们的知识。我仍记得两年前我进校园的时候,图书馆很老,我总是找不到我最喜欢的宇宙书籍。因此,我常常对同学抱怨图书馆已经过时了,我们学不到新的知识。
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