内容要关于所学科目,学习情况,兴趣爱好及课外活动。我所学的科目有:语文、数学、英语、品德、美术、音乐、电脑、科学、体育、体建、地方、综合(小学)。我的兴趣爱好是:钢琴、乒乓球、游泳、羽毛球、看书。我的学习情况很好,每一项科目都没有落下,而且都是优。课外活动就是一些跟同学一起的户外活动。
嗯,好。谢谢了!不着急,就是把条件串起来一下,写得有意思一点。
追答Hellow,everyone.My name is "xxx"I'm"12"years old.I come from "YuCai"primary school.I'm in class4,Grade6.Ihave many classes in the school.Such as:Chinese,Math,English,Social Science,Art,Music,Compter Studies,Science,P.E.I like playing the piano,I also like playing table tennis,and I like reading books too.I like to play badminton I am one of the students who always do well at school. After class ,I uaually play with my good friends.
大家好,我叫XXX,我今年12岁,我来自育才小学,我在6年级4班读书。在学校里,我有许多课程比如:语文、数学、英语、品德、美术、音乐、电脑、科学、体育。我喜欢弹钢琴,也喜欢打乒乓球,还喜欢读书。我最近喜欢打羽毛球。我是一个学习很好的学生。课余时间,我总是和朋友们一起玩耍。
问一下,你几年级,这篇作文里涉及到了定语从句,你懂吗?不懂可以追问
蛮好的,能不能缩短一点点呢
追答这还要缩短,在缩短没内容了,你要是认为多了,就把such as 后面的课程删掉几个,再把I am one of the students who always do well at school.换成I am really great at study.只不过把定语从句删了,显得水准不高,因为这篇作文本来就平常,建议你不要把I am one of the students who always do well at school.换掉
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