写作思路:通过现在与过去的对比,描述出不同的地方。
短文如下:
I was short and slim three years ago.
三年前我又矮又瘦。
Now I'm tall and strong.
现在我又高又壮。
I was not allowed to go outside to meet people before.
我以前不允许出去见别人。
Now I can go to my friends' party by myself.
现在我可以自己去参加朋友的聚会了。
I'm more independent now.
我现在更独立了。
写作思路:通过现在与过去的对比,描述出不同的地方。
My life has changed a lot in the past three years.
过去三年里,我的生活发生了很大的变化。
When I first came to school, I was short and fat.
最初来到学校的时候,我又矮又胖。
At that time, I was addicted to online games and spent most of my time playing computer games.
那时,我沉迷于网络游戏,大部分时间都花在了玩电脑游戏上面。
My parents are worried about it.
我的父母为此很担心。
Now I like sports. I often play basketball with my classmates after school.
现在的我,喜欢运动,我常常放学后和同学们去打篮球。
So I became tall and strong. I also like reading.
因此我变得又高又壮了。我也喜欢阅读。
Often go to the library to read some interesting books.
经常去图书馆读些有趣的书。
Good habits help me learn and my body becomes healthier.
良好的习惯助我学习一臂之力,身体也变得更加健康了。
My parents and teachers are delighted with my change.
我的父母和老师都为我的改变而感到欣喜。
本回答被网友采纳(好多人要汉语翻译:)
三年前我比较瘦小,现在我长高了也强壮了。以前我不允许出外与人相见,现在我可以自己去朋友家参加派对。现在的我更为独立了。